Cigarette Smoke Lyrics

What do ya'll thinks of these lyrics i wrote?
I just started songwriting. I got writing the music pretty good, but i have a hard time with lyrics. Here are the first few lines i wrote to start off:

The boys dressed to kill

The girls dressed to kill

Smoking on a cigarette lookin for a thrill



if you can help expound on it or give me tips. please help
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Thats actually kinda cool so far.. Depends on what the overall "theme" of the song is going to be... Perhaps



The boys dressed to kill

The girls dressed to kill

Smoking on a cigarette lookin for a thrill

Poppin a pill

feelin ill

lookin for a place to just chill...



somthing like that lol..

but what you got is good... just keep building off of what you got... and remember "THEME"



Hope I helped (:



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